honestly, amore’s commented almost all of the things going through by brain while reading this so please pardon my rather uncreative comment:
never stop writing. sincerely, i hope the ink never stops flowing through your veins and heart, may allah bless us with more of you. ameen.
i absolutely adored this poem, it is so intricately written i could probably write an essay analyzing every image. your writing is so vivid, it made me resonate with every line of this poem — this is a gift, truly. 🍊
can we take a moment to appreciate how it comes back full circle to the first sentence, and also how descriptive she made something as simple as a damn fruit, how textured everything is in general, and the flashbacks between the dialogues???? HOLD ME BACK
my hands are shaking this morning :( i don't know if it's the cold or the memory. but the world keeps turning... and i am still here, still in February, still unable to leave.. :(
ahh I love this, the imagery, the metaphors and how you do a full circle. The love you described was cute and sweet, I felt sad when the character blinked and it disappeared.
citrus fruits are truly cursed as the fruits of repressed emotion or something
if the last sentence gave you goosbumps we twins
honestly, amore’s commented almost all of the things going through by brain while reading this so please pardon my rather uncreative comment:
never stop writing. sincerely, i hope the ink never stops flowing through your veins and heart, may allah bless us with more of you. ameen.
i absolutely adored this poem, it is so intricately written i could probably write an essay analyzing every image. your writing is so vivid, it made me resonate with every line of this poem — this is a gift, truly. 🍊
i acc just started crying mahibah you are too sweet oh no my heartttt 😭😭😭😭😭
NOO DON’T CRYY 😭😭 i’m way too far away to give you a hug rn 🫂
plsss i wish you werenttt 😭😭😭😭
awww girl you worded all our thoughts so eloquently, i was just squealing 😂😭🫶🏻
you are a really good hypegirl omg — i think it’s really so so loveable of you to comment so much and spread so much joy 🤭
you're so sweeeet, i can tell why you gravitated towards rooma, like really attracts like 🥹🤍 tysmm!!
didn’t expect my day to have SO much girlhood 😭😭 YOU are so so sweet 🫵
hehehehe genuinely rooma's writing and your comments lit up my dark 1am here 😭
sorry about the spam yall i love this pretty gyal and her prettier words ♡
can we take a moment to appreciate how it comes back full circle to the first sentence, and also how descriptive she made something as simple as a damn fruit, how textured everything is in general, and the flashbacks between the dialogues???? HOLD ME BACK
that’s it if you don’t stop i’m booking flight tickets SIT YO AHH DOWN IM CHEESINNGNGGG
PLEASE DO COME HERE WE CAN EAT CHEESE TOGETHER OR WHATEVER THAT BRITISH LINGO IS
IT MEANS SMILING REALLY BIG LAMAOAOAO
I KNOW IM BEING FUNNY MY DARLING
the fact rooma was struggling to write this, and then casually dropped this masterpiece 🤯
guy's ive already talked her ear off about how crazy good this is but, GENUINELY are yall seeing this sorcery????
this is undoubtedly everyone's favorite piece of writing after reading it
staaapp staappp ittt (pls don’t)
this is so beautiful!!
says the queen of writing herself 💗
my hands are shaking this morning :( i don't know if it's the cold or the memory. but the world keeps turning... and i am still here, still in February, still unable to leave.. :(
this is absolutely beautiful yet a little heartbreaking as well. i love the way you’ve worded this!
jazakillah khairrrr sweetheart 💗
ahh I love this, the imagery, the metaphors and how you do a full circle. The love you described was cute and sweet, I felt sad when the character blinked and it disappeared.
CAN WE GET A TOUR OF YOUR MIND PLS HOW DOES ONE COME UP WITH THIS 🙏🏻
never getting over this 🪦
ALLAHUMABARIK ALLAHUMABARIK ALLAHUMABARIK
cursing 🗣crying 🗣 caroling 🗣
hehehehe sweetieeee